Wednesday, May 26, 2010
Poetry Project: sonnet
Monday, May 24, 2010
Standing Strong Outline
a.Snowy Minnesota
b.Taylor, Kaitlyn, Dakota, Makayla, and Ashley
c. Something that changes Dakota, Makayla, and Ashley friendship
II.Rising Action
a.Taylor-heartful,truthful,bold,kind,honest,and wants to do whats right.
Kaitlyn-Former homeless girl who lives with her single mother.
Dakota-Popular bully and "queen" of the Means Bees
Makayla-she is one of the "Mean Bees" who eventually turns over to Taylor side
Ashley- she is the backup for Dakota, regards Dakota with near-worship.
b.Taylor just wants to fit in.
III. Climax
a. the most important event in the story is when Dakota cuts Kaitlyn bands.
b. Makayla turns point is when she becomes friends with Taylor and Kaitlyn.
IV. Falling Action
a.Makayla and Dakota are not friend anymore.
b.Dakota gets mad at Taylor, at one point she says " this is all your fault. you're going to pay, for sealing Makayla."
V. Resolution
a. Taylor learns that no matter what going on around you its important to be strong inside and to be true to yourself. Kaitlyn learns that once you forgive you could move forward. Makayla learns that it takes courage to stand up to a bully and its takes courage to STOP being a bully. Dakota learns that no one is better, or worse than anyone else, we all have the same problems.
b. well, if i plan to do any book it would be about when Taylor is looking forward to the seventh grade. but when Taylor, Makayla and Kaitlyn start get text messages and spam emails. they don't know who it is but Makayla and Kaitlyn believe its Dakota but Taylor knew that Dakota change over the summer and wants to be friend with Taylor. who is behind all the mean messages?And what can one girl do to put an end to the BULLYING?
Friday, May 21, 2010
The Novel Project: Chapter one
Chapter one
The yellow bus stop at the end of Nana’s winding driveway. Taking a deep breath of icy air, I climbed the bus steps and dropped into the brown padded seat three rows behind the bus driver. My sister slid in beside me,
Thirty pairs of eyes bored into us.” Who are they?” someone whispered.” “New kids.” “From Iowa!”
I pulled off my blue mittens and on the window I scratched a tic-toe broad. “Hey, Kianna, wanna play?”
“Nah.” When she removed her hat Kianna brown hair sprang up like cornstalks. She bent over her library book, “Secrets of the Solar System.”
“Could be a parallel universe out there,” she said. “Someday we could travel into another dimension of space and time.”
“Changing school is like entering a parallel universe,” I said, staring at the window and thinking of my old school and my friends Haley and Jessica.
The bus driver slowed to a stop and cranked the door open. I paused outside the brick building, reading the name: Edgewater Elementary. Kianna was already heading through the door. “C’mon Taylor,” he called. She’s only eleven months older than me.
Red and pink hearts decorated the hallway. Valentine’s Day is my favorite day of the whole year. It’s actually tomorrow, but our new teacher celebrates it today.
As Kianna headed off down the hall, I stepped through the doorway of room 106.
At the chalkboard, a man wearing a jacket, craning his head of thinning hair toward me.
“You must be Taylor Maxwell! I’m Mr. Brown. Everyone’s excited to have you here. Did you get the list I sent?”
I nodded. He’s sent a list of twenty-four names, so I would know everybody names and how many valentines to bring.
Right now he pointed to a desk near the door. “ in January, I let the class choose cluster partners.” He said. “There’s one open seat in table four.
“Okay,” I said, moving my things. I unpacked my button-decorated notebook and organized markers, pencils, pens, and crayons.
Three girls sauntered in and sat down at my table. I glanced up and smiled “hey” I said “I’m Taylor.”
No response, but the girl with long-brown hair offered me a half hearted smile.
As more students arrived whispers fluttered around the room.
“Un-oh”
“The new girl’s stuck with the queen bees!”
“You mean the Mean Bees,” someone whispered.
I tried again. “Hey I’m Taylor Maxwell.”
The three girls all wore ponytails, were bust talking to one another. My mother had always has a joke, so I tried “ hey , is it ponytail day?”
They glanced my way but shifted their back toward me.
Since they weren’t friendly, I studied the names on their desks: Dakota James, Makayla Matthew, and Ashley Johnson.
Lucky me, I just fallen into an unfriendly hive.
Monday, May 17, 2010
During the summer it is so easy to say, " I have nothing to do!" no more excuses-here is a list of top 10 things todo the next time you are bored.
1.Gather up a few friend, and have a picnic in the park.
2.Buy some fashion magazines, pick out a couple of really cute outfit, and try to recreate them for less!
3.Play some childhood games like "Sorry," "Candyland," or "Pretty Pretty Princess."
4.Go to the movies
5.Have a sleepover party and watch scary movies.
6.Start a diary and write in it everyday about how your summer was this year.
7.Bead some bracelets and sell them for charity.
8.Volunteer at the local animals and homeless shelter.
9.Do 25 jumping jacks
10.Go window-shopping with a friend.
Best thing about summer "NO SCHOOL!"
Tuesday, May 11, 2010
Taylor Maxwell: a sixth grader who moved with her family to Minnesota from Iowa to live with her grandmother. she is heartfelt, truthful girl, but is afraid to stand up for herself at the beginning of the story because she is so put down by the Mean Bees. she is bold. kind, honest, and wants to do what's right.
Kaitlyn Thompson: Kaitlyn is a former homeless girl who lives with her single mother. she is very reserved because she does not want anyone to find out her secret. she is a very good violin. she and Taylor become friends, but Kaitlyn turns against her when she believes that Taylor told Dakota her secret.
Dakota James: Dakota is a popular bully and the "queen" of the Mean Bees. she appears very innocent after she does something wrong and can seem very intimidating. Dakota is the best swimmer until Taylor comes; Makayla and Ashley do whatever she says. she refers to Taylor and Kaitlyn as "loser 1 and loser2."
Makayla Matthews: Makayla is one of the "Mean Bees" who eventually turns over to Taylor side. she secretly doesn't like what Dakota but is afraid of what will happen if she stands up.
Ashley Johnson: Ashley is the backed up for Dakota, she regards Dakota with near-worship and will do whatever she says. Ashley of all the girls, is not developed much in the book.
Standing Strong
Thursday, February 4, 2010
Finding the Nouns
Monday, January 25, 2010
4 types of sentence review
Tuesday, January 19, 2010
*Homework #76*

(Non-Fiction is when it tells a true story).
Friday, January 15, 2010
Is Byron Just a Delinquent?
Is Byron a good brother to Kenny and Joetta? yes, Byron is a good brother to Kenny and Joetta because on page 25 Byron stand up for Kenny when Larry Dunn(a bully at school) sold Kenny gloves. Byron like help his brother and sister, but does it in a bad way because on page 54 it said " Joey stated to cry" that when Byron was convince joey to wear the winter clothes, but he still made her cry and also on page 26 when Byron told Kenny " look man, if you don't want people to look at your messed up eye, you just gotta do this" Byron sometime like threaten Kenny for example on page 135 when Byron said " you say one word about this to anyone and said I'm gonna jack your little light weight behind, you hear?" this is how Byron is a good brother or bad brother to Kenny and Joetta.
Does Byron has a good side or is he just a delinquent? Byron does have a good side. Byron shows his good when the family take a trip to Birmingham. Byron showed his good side when he was talking to Kenny on page 202 about how brave he was for thronging to save joey for the bombing, this is what Byron said" Ain't no genies in the world Kenny ain't no magic powers, there ain't even no Angel, not in the neighborhood anyway. Man, i just don't get you, you supposed to be the one who's so smart. how can you believe in something as stupid as magic powers and genies living behind a couch but not believe it was part of you that took Joey outta that that Church?" and also on page page 200 Byron also tell Kenny this " we all did, Kenny. there ain't nothing wrong with being sad of scared about that. I'm sad about it too. i real scared too". Byron shows his good side on the trip, but real did want people in Birmingham to think he was a delinquent.
Byron is a very nice person, every since that trip Byron had change the way he acted. Byron had face many challenge on the trip to Birmingham. Byron is a delinquent, but deep in side he somebody different.
Wednesday, January 13, 2010
The Watsons go to Birmingham: Kenny Scarpbook
Sept 14 , 1963
Today we went over to the Collier's Landing, Grandma Sand told me that a couple of year ago Miss Thomas's little boy Jimmy got caught up in some kinda whrilpool there and they didn't find the poor soul body for three days. i'd only listened to half of what grandma had siad, and now me, Joey and byron were standing at a sign with arrows pointed in two directions. the one pointing at the left siad " PUBLIC SWIMMING" and the other one on the rightn siad " WARNING! NO TRESPASING! NO SWIMMING! NO PUBLIC ENTREE!
Sept. 15, 1963
l know it was Sunday because i could hear joey getting ready for Sunday school. the neighbors came and got her as soon as i got out of bed. i was standing in the doorway doing my morning Socrates when she walked by. joey had on a fluffy white skirt, a regular blouse and the little white gloves grandma sands give her. the people that came and got her ask me why i was going to Sunday school. i told them i forget to get up on time. Everybody in the house knew that was a lied bu no one seem to care. i wondered if something was wrong with me, because it was really easy for me to lie. i had my cereal and went out to the backyard. it was too hot even in the morning. i started going to sleep under the tree and thought i was dreaming when the noise came. it seemed like every animals, birds and bugs in Birmingham stopped making noise for about one second. my dad came to the back doors in pajama pants and a t-shirt. i leaned back against the tree and closed my eyes. a few minutes later, Byron just told me that a guy just came by and said somebody dropped a bomb on joey church. if that was true why did i just stand there looking stupid. as soon as we got to the church, mom and dad were freaking out. they couldn't find joey anywhere, but you could see people coming out of the church all bloody and all you could tell people were buried under the part of the Church that collapsed. i cant take this anymore. first i almost drowns, then we think joey got killed by the bomb. i think i want to go back to flint.
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